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As the walls crashed down upon me
In these room full of struggles and pain
I searched for you...
For these turmoil
That have come to pass, would be nothing with you
I ran around, shouting...
Your name, over and over again
Until I was coarse and tired
Helpless and alone... I sat,
In a corner, crying my heart out for you...
As my beating heart made me deaf, to the sound...
Of the echoes of suffering
In these room full of struggles and pain
I searched for you...
For these turmoil
That have come to pass, would be nothing with you
I ran around, shouting...
Your name, over and over again
Until I was coarse and tired
Helpless and alone... I sat,
In a corner, crying my heart out for you...
As my beating heart made me deaf, to the sound...
Of the echoes of suffering
Literature
Fallen Angel
Fallen Angel
Deep within this soul,
A fallen angel appears,
She is tormented daily,
burned and hated by the truth of life,
and struggles under the pain of it all,
It screams in the darkness,
searching out for that something,
trying to keep its head out of the water,
but no-one is there to rescue her before she drowns,
The angel holds on for life itself,
never understanding why,
life is so precious,
when your'e wanting to die,
All because of the life she leads,
this fallen angel stirrs,
in its lonely heart,
it slowly withers and dies,
Deep within this soul a fallen angel wanders,
in and out of existance,
Alone.
Tired.
A
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Angels
Heart broken I stand in the shadows.
Hands by my side, head hung low.
With the wound on my hand.
A blood stain on the sand.
I look into the sky
Way up high.
I sprout wings and fly away,
I am an angel, i am one today...
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An Angels Death
An Angels Death
When he dies his wings go bare
His heart turns black
His eyes turn dim and blank
He has been blind for a long time
No one is there to hold him
Drowning in sorrow
Lost in Darkness
He calls his lovers name
He cries tears of crimson regret
He's drenched in what he fears
Though he is chained forever
He cannot get away
His death was sweet, and slow
He suffered it was delicious
His screaming was succulent
As he lies dieing he thinks of the one he loves
He calls out his name as though he would come.
"Tenchi I forgive you for not knowing this,
I am no
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another sad theme... anyways I'll explain this poem to you guys because this one has a story though I don't mind if you interpret it in a different way...
We'll the person actually was looking for support and obviously he/she thought he didn't find it... but in this line :
As my beating heart made me deaf, to the sound...
Of the echoes of suffering
I was trying to make a subtle implication that the support he/she needed was in his/her heart
We'll the person actually was looking for support and obviously he/she thought he didn't find it... but in this line :
As my beating heart made me deaf, to the sound...
Of the echoes of suffering
I was trying to make a subtle implication that the support he/she needed was in his/her heart
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Amazing... I said something along the same lines but your sounds more poetic than mine.
Sadness isnt all bad. It can bring people together.
Sadness isnt all bad. It can bring people together.